作文评分标准：

1. A档（10-9）能偶围绕话题进行表述，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。

2. B档（8-7）能够围绕话题进行表示，语言有少量错误，表达基本连贯、清楚。

3. C档（6-5）能够基本围绕话题进行表述，语言表达有些错误，行文不是很连贯，但不影响句意理解。

4. D档（4-3）尚能围绕本话题进行表示，语言错误较多，影响意思表达。

5. E档（2-0）只能写出与话题相关的一些单词或一两个句子，只有个别句子可懂。

第一：作文练习：据世界卫生组织（WHO）统计，每年有200万人死于吸烟，60万人死于二手烟。为此，我国规定，从今年5月1 日起，严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合图片和下面所给要点，以“Saying No to Smoking”为题，谈谈吸烟的危害。

1. 吸烟有害；2. 吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病；3. 吸烟影响青少年成长；4. 二手烟同样有害；

5. 你的态度：面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办？ One Possible Version:(写好相应的中文，背诵范文）

Saying No to Smoking

According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out from May 1 on.

As is shown in the picture, smoking is bad for people’s health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, every of us should follow the law and say no to smoking.

第二：作文练习：近年来，中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。

要求：（1）内容包括：①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。

（2）字数：60---80词。（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

Everyone wants to keep healthy today, especailly our students. But we don’t pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, espacially at the weekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.

It is important for us to have good habbits. We should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.

第三：作文练习：地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救）our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇70词左右的短文参评。

1.重要性：只有一个地球2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然

Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.

So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave；do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.

Let’s act now from everything to save our environment. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

第四：作文练习：假如你是张华，你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法，清根据以下要点用英语写封回信。除以下外再提出一条建议。

要点：1.加入汉语班学习，可向老师学习并与同学练习汉语；2.看中文电视、读中文书、报纸、杂志；

3.听、唱汉语歌，有助于汉语词汇 4.交中国朋友，即可练习口语又可了解中国。

要求：1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.文中不能出现自己的地址、姓名及所在学校名称。

One possible version:

Dear Dave,

I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice. First, As a foreign, you need to go and join a Chinese learning activity group, the most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible.

Second, if you want to improve your listening ability, you’d better read Chinese books, listen to the tapes and radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs.

Third, you make some Chinese friends. Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some Chinese festivals to you, too.

I think we will have a good time .write to me soon.

Yours

Zhang Hua

第五：作文练习：假设你喜欢的老师是Mr. Wang 或者Ms. Wang.请根据下面的提示，以My favorite teacher 为题目，用英语写一篇短文。

要求：1. 必须包括①description ②friendship ③the best quality 三个方面的内容，括号内的提示可以任意选择或可以适当发挥。

2.文中不得出现真实姓名或学校。

3．字数（80-100）（文章题目和开头已经给出，不计入总次数）

My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36- year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.

第六：作文练习：你刚从海南岛回来，请用英语写一篇关于海南岛的报道。词数：60-90。不要署名。内容还包括以下要点：

1.中国第二大海岛；2.气候温暖，空气新鲜；3.有海滩，有高大的椰子树；4.可以游泳，钓鱼，划船等；

5.可以品尝各种海鲜。参考词汇：island岛，coconut palm tree椰子树，seafood海鲜

Hainan Island is in the south part of our country. On Island Hainan, you could enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful scenery. You will never forget that.

Hai Kou city is the capital of Hainan Province while it is also the biggest city on the island. There, you could either go to visit the flower markets or enjoy the delicious seafood. There, you could find many beautiful beaches. People love walking along the seaside or swimming in the sea. There are many tall coconut palm trees to see.

Welcome to Hainan Island! I’m sure you will have a good time there.

第七：作文练习：关于中学生使用手机

赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。
反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。

注意：1.可适当增加细节和连接词，使文章通顺连贯；开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；2.词数：100左右；

Dear Editor,

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.

As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it. Suppose there’s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There’re also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies. In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.

Yours truly,

Wang Lin

第八：作文练习：最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。 下表是你们小组的情况请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener, she lives plants, she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. He’d like to cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to protect the people safe.

Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

第九：作文练习：根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

75. 成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫刘明，是美国中学生艾丽的朋友，你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。

Hi! Alice,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Yes, I sometimes have the same problem.

I think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. You don’t need to worry too much. She’ll probably pay you back when she has money. If you don’t lend her the money, I’m afraid you may lose the friend.

I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends need money, I will try my best to help them. Maybe I’ll get it back, or maybe I won’t.

I hope what I said can help you.

Yours, Liu Ming

第十：作文练习：花果山是连云港著名的旅游胜地，每年有大量的游客来此游玩。请你根据下表中游客以前和现在行为的变化，以“Behave well during the travel”为题，用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你的感受。

注意：1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯; 2.词数100左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;

4.参考词汇:行为、举止：behave;吐痰：spit

Behave well during the travel

Huaguo Mountain is a famous tourist attraction in Lianyungang. Every year many tourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery. But a few years ago, a lot of bad behaviors happened quite often during the travel. Some threw litters, painted on the walls, and spit on the ground everywhere. Some picked flowers, destroyed trees and hurt animals. And even worse, some smoked in the woods. How dangerous!

Luckily, things have changed now. Rubbish is always put into dustbins. People are friendly to animals. Nobody smokes around the woods and places of interest are well kept. All these changes make us happy.

As a student, I think we should know it’s our duty to protect the environment. In order to make Huaguo Mountain and our city more beautiful, let’s behave well and try our best to help fight(against) bad behaviors…